I found this article today and thought it might be relevant to your project. It's about a game called Miss Bimbo that some critics say promotes eating disorders. Here's the link to the article:
I think I told you this already but I really like your topic. The only thing that confused me a little was your research question. It's very long and it seems to get a little off topic of the pro anorexia topic. Is there anyway that you can rephrase it so that the readers know a little bit more about what you're going to say before we get to the actual web essay? Otherwise, great job and I can't wait to read more.
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I found this article today and thought it might be relevant to your project. It's about a game called Miss Bimbo that some critics say promotes eating disorders. Here's the link to the article:
http://technology.timesonline.co.uk/tol/news/tech_and_web/the_web/article3613881.ece
James
I think I told you this already but I really like your topic. The only thing that confused me a little was your research question. It's very long and it seems to get a little off topic of the pro anorexia topic. Is there anyway that you can rephrase it so that the readers know a little bit more about what you're going to say before we get to the actual web essay? Otherwise, great job and I can't wait to read more.
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